RED

Sat, 07/26/2014 - 23:01 -- Niasha4

 

Heat rising ever so slowly causing the heart to murmur,pulse,even skip a beat.The rapid expansion of pressure expands bring deviantation because it has taken all that it can.Mouth shut eyes agape,when that time comes there is a merge a loss of identity and a commerce with words.Commitment is commodious to conflict and ther is no escape.Love is onerous,love aver is what is longed for but a dismal gash flowing and pouring is left there.With myopic delicacy all that i see is red.

 

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