Rebuilding Bliss

Mon, 07/08/2013 - 23:57 -- kmham


Waves crashing along the shore,

All I see is more and more.

They keep on moving until dawn,

Flowing channels move on and on.

Seeing willful water pull the soft sand,

Taking it away hand in hand.


Bringing bright and beautiful colors about,

It’s almost as if they shout and shout!

The sunset always smiles to me,

But all I do is see and see.

Creating nature scenes and breathtaking views,

Attracting more I do and I do’s.

They are just as striking as the sun,

All they are is fun and fun.

They don’t just come around whenever,

I hope they last forever and ever.


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