The Reasons i am

You have inspired me to be best i can
And to me you are the definition of a real man
Emancipated and concentrated i often see on your face
My promise to you that the time you raised me wasn’t a waste
i’ll continue to stay on track, stay on pace
It seems like yesterday the world was this huge place and you were standing on top of it all
Tall and proud but not much has changed except the realization that you can’t do all things
But that’s why i admire you, because you know your limits
Through all the moments i’ve felt happiness, wonder, confusion, and sadness
But all these things were to make me a better man

i love and thank you dad.

 

This poem is about: 
My family

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