"Rattled" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 7/1/2015

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United Kingdom

Ya Know I Have Been Told That My Voice RATTLES... !!!
But Folks You KNOW... I AIN'T NO SNAKE... !!!!
So I Think it's THOSE Who BATTLE...
With Talk They... CANNOT TAKE...
Who Make These Types of Comments...
That ARE A... BIG MISTAKE... !!!

I May Be TALL And Dark...
But My Name AIN'T Palpatine or DARTH... !!!

So MY FORCEFUL Talk And Thoughts Make Calls...
For Empires To FALL That Run WEAK HEARTED Talk... !!!!!
Mental Forts That FALL Well Short of Being STRONG WILL SING Dud Songs... !!!

And Say DUMB Things Like A Tank With NO THINK... !!?!!
I Meant THINK TANKS Whose Battles Rank Profile and RILE The Minds of Types...
INSECURE Who'll FIGHT EVEN When They KNOW That They're NOT RIGHT.... ?!?
I've Seen Them GO But SOME Do TRY To Say That I... Am A VICIOUS GUY... !?!
Oh Because... My Voice RATTLES Well It Seems To Me More Likely To Be...
That Simply They CAN'T Handle Talk That Does NOT Amble Alongside Being Tactful ...

It's TRUE My Talk Does RANKLE But Has NO TIME To... DABBLE...
In POINTLESS Tittle Tattle With... SUPERFICIAL Cattle... !!!
Of Course I'm Meaning Sheep Whose Form of Honest Speak Is FILLED With FALLACY... !!!

SOME It Seems STILL CANNOT Deal...
With What Is Deemed As YES..... FREE SPEECH............................. .........
I'd Rather RATTLE Than Be UNSADDLED By PURE Hypocrisy... !!!

Now That DOES RATTLE A Man Like Me... !!!
When Peeps' UNRAVEL Who They TRULY BE...
And ALL Their .... INSECURITIES .... !!!

When They Become UNDONE Like Shoes On Feet...
You See Them TRIP UP Like... " Silent Movies "... !!!
RESTING On Laurels With... NO Hardys'... !!!!!!!!
They See NO DEFEAT In The Way They BE...
So... OF COURSE It's ME Who RATTLES Their Chi... !?!
ACTUALLY My Voice When I Start To Make NOISE... !!!
It's TRUE When I'm ANNOYED And LOSE My Cool And Poise...
I CAN Be VERY LOUD And YES My Voice Can DROWN...
The Sounds of CLOWNS In Crowds... !!!

But RATTLE... Now I Have NO Wish To Get You WORRIED... !?!
Or To Make You NERVOUS That's NOT My PURPOSE... !!!
If My Voice IRRITATES What Can I Say Oh I See Okay NOTHING... !?!
Let Me TELL YOU Something Y'all IRRITATE ME With ALL Your Frontin'... !!!

Bitches And Guys NEED To Be MORE WISE... !!!
BEFORE DROPPING Lines Where WEAKNESS Lies... !!!

Telling LIES Is NOT My Vibe... !!!
I've Done My Time of Trying To Hide THE TRUTH From My Eyes...
But Now DON'T Fear Letting CANDOUR Steer It's Way To EARS Who Seem UNcLEAr...
As To What This DOES... It Deals In LOVE NOT RATTLING Stuff... !!!!!

UNLESS You're One Whose Insecurity RUNS.............
From Your EARS To Frontiers Where YOUR FEARS... APPEAR... ?!!!?
ALL THIS Psycho BABBLE ABOUT How You Get RATTLED...
Like Ranchers Cattle REVEALS That You Are SHACKLED...
And NEED To YES......................... U N TA N G L E ............................
Your INSECURITIES And STOP This Talk That's WEAK... !!!
When What You HEAR and SEE Are A Man Whose Speech And AURA Feeds...

OFF HONESTY That SPEAKS To Peoples' ... " INNER BEING " ... !!!
My Words And Thoughts DEFEND ERADICATING Trends.....
Where People USE EXCUSES To COVER UP Their LOOSENESS... !!!
And USE Their FOOLISH Movements That CLEARLY NEED IMPROVEMENTS... !!!!!
These Words of Verse DEFINE... Big Virges' State of Mind... !!!

One NOT Inclined To SHACKLE... DISMANTLE Or ENTANGLE...
My Mental Into Tangles Like Slaves Passed On As Chattel... !!!!!
I Suggest INTERNAL BATTLES You RIDE But CAN'T Unsaddle...
You ATTACK From................ DIFFERENT Angles .................
And Maybe THEN You WON'T Get TENSE And LET Yourself Get....

.................................. " RATTLED " .........................

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