Race to utopia

Fri, 07/16/2021 - 13:50 -- mrapook

The race of races
should be delayed
at least a century or so
or until we find
that finish line,
a place where nobody knows.
 

then the race will be
to that unknown land
in hope that the winner
cares much for man
than his predecessors
have in the past,
 

and live a life so free
no prejudice in thee
the finish line for me
will be peace at last.

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

Comments

Wired6

Hi MRAPOOK,I feel melancholy. Is that what you want us readers 2 experience?

Great poem nonetheless. X

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