Putting the past to rest

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I have so much on my mind

and i'm runnng out of time

don't even know my next line

got the world on my shoulders 

and i'm bout to fall over

can you see the stress in my eyes?

cause all I wanna do is cry

and all i wanna do is pray

pray to go but never in vian

ask him can he feel my pan

does he know all that I went thru

did he feel the pain that I did

the aches and burns the sorrows and cuts

all that pain was driving me nuts

it hurt more that anything

cause everyday it felt life it rained

poured and poured in the same lane

all i'm asking you is to show the same.

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