"Precision" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 24/11/2005 I

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United Kingdom

I Believe In PRECISION When Making Decisions... !!!

And Find That THIS Helps Avoid...................... COLLISIONS..... !!!!!

Precision of Thought Helps Keep My Mind From Being FRAUGHT ...
With Making Moves That Are The Sort A FOOLISH Man Does NOT Abort... ?!?

PRECISE Is A Word That Rhymes With WISE...
And When You THINK About Them You Can See... WHY...

My Flows PRECISE When Writing Rhymes... !!!
So When It's Time To ... GRAB The Mic'...

My Rhyme Style SHINES INTO... " Spotlights "... !!!!

My Visions Are Built With PRECISION... !!!
MY Use of Diction And Inscriptions...
Help Me HOLD A STRONG Position... !!!
And RESIST...... Weak Opposition... !!!
Who HATE My GLISTEN And DO NOT Listen To My Words...

And Wonder WHY They Then Get HURT.... !!!
FOR What It's Worth I Think They Should Be...
................... " down to earth "..................

BEFORE Incisions With PRECISION...
Cut Them UP In... " Lecters' kitchen "... !!!!!

And Parts of Them...
Soon End Up................................. ........................ MISSING..... !?!?!

Precision Is NOT An... " Impossible Mission "... !!!

Or A Movie Like... " Pulp Fiction "... !!!

It Is Something That Needs NO BLING... !!!
And DOESN'T Need A Diamond Ring ... !!!

Precision and CORRECTION Have DIFFERENT Directions... !!!
If You Do Things RIGHT You Shouldn't Need To Do Them TWICE... !!!

That's A Line To FEED Young Minds... !!!

So That's A Line I WILL ... " REWIND "... !!!

Just For Those Who Remain... "BLIND"...

If You Do Things RIGHT You Shouldn't Need To Do Them TWICE... !!!

Now Some of You Are Saying But NOW I Am REPLAYING !

I Did It TWICE To Prove A POINT... !!!
Cos' Many MISS My ... " Clever Rhymes "...

AND Because I LIKE That Line... !!!

And For Those Who Are Inclined...
To Read This After TOO MUCH WINE... !!!!!!!

See READING When With PRECISION ...

Helps Us Make INFORMED Decisions...
Rather Than MISUNDERSTAND And Enter Into FOOLISH Plans... !!!!!

A Verse Like THAT Proves I'm THE MAN... !!!
Who CHOOSES NOT TO... " Understand "...

These Days I Try To... OVER - Stand ... !!!!!

And THIS Helps Me AVOID......................... Problems... !!!!!
With Women Men And YES Children... !!!
They NEED Precision In Their Lives... !!!
NOT A Life of... WayWArd Signs... !!!!!

DON'T Do THIS But Then DO THAT... ?!?
Sometimes I Wonder What Is FACT... ???

What Is RIGHT And What IS... " WRONG "... ?

When I Write ... Am I PRECISE... ?!?

That's Something To Analyse ...
Like Compromise During Our Lives...

I'll Leave That To Another Time...

Through A Piece I Have... " Designed "...
By Use of Prose And Clever Rhyme... !!!

PRECISION Moves Are How I Groove...
When Playing Sports And ON Dance Floors... !!!

But Sometimes ...
INSTINCT ... IS The LICK ... !!!!!

And Makes Me Write My Lyrics QUICK... !!!
I Then Go Back And FILL The Cracks...

By Use of................................ Pause.....
To S l o w ly............ G N A W......

At Those Who CHOOSE To Stare At Floors ...
Instead of Giving Out APPLAUSE...
These Are Words I've Said Before...

PRECISION Helps Me KEEP Things RAW.... !!!

While Many CLEARLY Are Just.... " FRAUDS ".... !!!

Folks Like THIS I Now............................... Ignore.........

Cos' In The END Their Style Is weak And FILLED With Flaws... !!!!!

While I Believe In CLEAR Descriptions of The Things WITHIN My Vision .........
I Use Inscriptions ... Like A Surgeon Does INCISIONS.... !!!!!

Well Folks I Hope This Has Been Well Written...
My Poetic Piece That's Called...

......... " PRECISION " .......

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