Positivity

Peel back the layers

and look inside;

deep in the abyss

you will find.

 

A little spark

a lovely note;

some most have

but others hope.

 

When all that's left

is your love;

don't look down

but look above.

 

Keep your mind hopeful

and you will see;

what I have for you

is my positivity.

 

When life is gray

or even black;

All the shouting

and their attacks.

 

Hold on tight

and look ahead;

Sometimes it's forgotten

but not quite dead.

 

It's always there

when I need it most;

my golden trophy

my winning post.

 

When all is lost

and I want to flee;

holding me up

is my positivity.

 

Comments

sammie.kahkola

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very inspirational

its about positive energy radiating to lives

well said

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