Poetic Buildings

Location

I'm a visioner

I see great things happening-

Poetic Buildings

 

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susannababayev1996

Hello mentor-

I was really inspired to write this haiku. After hurricane sandy, my friends and classmates lost family and homes. I really felt sorry and I heard about this poem scholarship where i could write about this loss. I want it to show people that there are people like me who are willing to help and support the ones who lost their homes and families because of the storm. I hope you like it :) Please give me some comments and any feedback you can!

Susanna Babayev 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i like the concept 

i would add couple of verses to build on idea

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