Please Don't Critique, I'm Just Being Unique

Wed, 12/03/2014 - 22:52 -- kmfine

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From the moment I wake, till I lay down at night,

I have to have everything organized just right.

When it comes to keeping things clean,

I’m like a machine.

I get stressed when I see clutter,

But when things are organized I feel my heart flutter.

I always do my best,

To avoid a big mess.

I am not a hoarder,

I like things in their order.

Even at school,

Being organized is my rule.

If you peeked in my locker,

It is clean,

Oh what a shocker!

Some people may see this and want to critique,

But I think it is this that makes me unique.

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