United States
46° 17' 16.296" N, 87° 20' 29.67" W

It starts off small, feeling rising

you arms so strong they life me high, above

can't get up from the place I'm lying 

feeling so light like a bird or dove

the movement of the beautiful lights 

the breathing as one so close in time

holding my hearts in all these nights

at times I'm so speechless

the deed is done

I'm left to clean up the effidence made

it's not making love, you call it "fun" 

I'm left feeling like I have been played. 


Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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