Pick A Tree

Location

26164
United States
39° 0' 19.4904" N, 81° 42' 46.9872" W

Stare into his eyes and what do you see
A frightened little boy who wants to please
In this big world, he doesn't stand a chance
Everyone ignores him without a glance
His life is hard and he knows not why
He wants nothing more than to die tonight
So a plan is devised, a certain time and place
He doesn't let his feelings show on his face
He gathers a rope and finds the right tree
But then someone comes along and sees
All of his lies that began misery
He looks into her eyes, his visionary
No more lies to tell and everyone sees
The happy boy that he was meant to be.

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savigirl14

Wow this poem is amazing. i love the emotion and how he gets saved  and becomes a happy boy again. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

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