Personal Storm

Sun, 08/03/2014 - 12:12 -- cnd003


I tried to balance

The pressures from a distance

In safety


But the winds pulled

At my current until I

Was sucked in


The eye, at first, was

The most beautiful thing I

Had ever seen


When it passed,

I swam furiously

To get back


It knocked me

As down as I

Could go


So I swam

Away with no intention

To return


And now that my pool

Is calm, I see all the dust

It stirred


And I am

Left to clean it up


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