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The path.

What path?

Which do you choose?

What if you change your mind?

Where do you go from there?

The never-ending road to death.

Mysterious, exciting,terrifying.

Copious ways to fail.

Copious ways to succeed.

Won't know what happens till you take a walk on the plank and commit yourself to forward motion.

No matter what, you'll die.

It's a matter of where you go,

Who you bring with you,

And how fast you move on.



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