Just over a month ago, I lost my way 
that is a sad thing for me to say 
you brought me back to life and now 
you make me cry, 
with the rain outside 
I erased my past just like that but now it’s 
all coming back why I never wanted to 
love again, I forgot about all the strife
and all that pain, 
that this old life gave an angel of the night 
gave me a nasty fright and now I pray for 
the light to live right;
you gave my life its meaning but then you 
taken it all back with much pain and shames 
the darkness came with a storm of rain 
then a moon shine upon my face 
lit a path ways for me to walk; 
became the moon of my nights and no 
more love no more hate my life begins today 
with a smile on my face; 
the past is gone and my future is on its way 
true love will find me one day when life 
becomes a better place. 

Poetic Judy Emery © 2004

The Queen Of Darken Dreams Poetic Lilly Emery


Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Well written! 

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