"Pass or Fail" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 15/5/2013

Location

United Kingdom

These Days It Seems That MANY...
Are Showing... They're NOT Ready...

To PASS The TEST of Managing STRESS... !!!
Like The STRESS of Work That CLEARLY HURTS...
The Minds of Those Who MONEY CONTROLS... !!!

So They Work SLOW... In Fact You Know...
They Move Like SNAILS On Work Detail... !!!
So YUP That's A FAIL... !!!
So MANY Trials... So MUCH Denial...
I Wonder Sometimes How Some SURVIVE... ?!?
With ALL Their LIES And Their Coc' Lines... !!!
YUP Another FAIL... SNORTING To Sail...
When You're On Land... ?!?
NO PASS Is Availed For Embracing THAT Stance...
BENDING Over To Rub With Shoulders...
FAIL AGAIN... That AIN'T The Way... !!!!!!
I Give A PASS To Those In Class...
Who DON'T Lick Ass To Get TOP MARKS... !!!!!
Talking of... ASS... !!!
So MANY FAILS On Relationship Trails...
SUCKING The Prick of A WELL KNOWN Dick...
Girls Get FAILED QUICK For Being Dicks' Chick... !!!
But Fellas WHAT Is With You NOW... ?!?
Moving Like FOWL Around These SOWS... !!!!?!!!!
Talk of CHICKEN Heads Now Gets Me VEX... !!!

Cos I'm Seeing TOO MANY... " Men "...
Now Act Like Womens' ... PETS ... !?!
So Yup Y'all Know What's Coming NEXT... !!!
That's A FAIL... Men Acting Like... " Ho's "...
I Thought It Was Pro's Who EXPOSE Their HOLES... !!!
We've ALL Got Holes In How We Roll...
But You Get A PASS When You MINIMISE Those... !!!!!
How About PROMISES Peeps' DON'T Keep...
Who Then Act Like... SHEEP...
Or Worse Still HOSTAGES When Asked To REVEAL...
The TRUTH About Moves That PROVE Them To Be WEAK... ?!?
I See SO MANY SNEAKS Talkin' Bout' The VIP's...
With Whom They Choose To SNEAK... !!!
Because Like Them They're FREAKS... !!!
FREAKS of NATURE LIVING For PAPER...
Whose Attitude To Labour Is... "I'll get to it later !"...
But When It Comes To Getting PAID...
The Moves They USE Are Smooth But CRUDE... !!!
So YES A FAIL Goes To Those Crews...
Who THINK They're Slick When In Fact They're Frail...
And Should CURTAIL Their USING TRICKS That TRULY STINK... !!!!!
I AIN'T Batfink' But STILL ... PASS GO ... !!!
UNLIKE These Ho's Who USE Their Holes To YES Pass GO... !!!
Hold On There NO That's A FAIL Go... STRAIGHT To JAIL... !!!
I'm ENJOYING This Write Cos' I'm In The SUNSHINE...
And It's The Day BIG VIRGE Passed Into This World...
Yeah The Day of My Birth... NO FAILURES There... !!!
But Now I FEAR That FAILS Are HERE And EVERYWHERE... !!!
Well NOT..................... " Everywhere " .................. !!!
But We Should BEWARE... !!!
of... Giving Out PASSES To Those Who NEED Classes...
In How NOT To Act Like These... " Modern Day ASSES "... !!!!!
So Who Is The SMARTEST And Who Is The HARDEST...
And Who Like The DOCTOR... Has A Time Machine TARDIS... !?!
I'm Having FUN Now But DON'T You Doubt... !!!
That... FAILURES I SEE In Todays' Peeps'...
Are Things BIG V DON'T Take Lightly... !!!
So... WATCH Your Step With Me... !!!
DON'T Make PROMISES You CAN'T KEEP... !!!!
Because That Is SYNONYMOUS With Leaving Folk DISPLEASED... !!!
So When You Want To... " Play The ASS "...
BEFORE You Get DERAILED... REMEMBER ... !!!!!!

........................ " PASS or FAIL " ..................

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