Paradise Dream

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A soft breeze floats across the sea,

The spray of sun beneath the trees.

Summer dreams.

The sand caressing my two feet,

Your warmth so soft and lingering,

Fluttering.

Your eyes are softly shining bright

Like the ocean shimmering.

Trick of sight.

Once the sun slipped out the sky,

Everything was just a lie.

Say goodbye.

Tears come clouding my two eyes,

I clear my sight as I let them fall.

Shed them all.

Goodbye my foolish, hopeless love.

I close my eyes and let it fall,

Fading love.

I should've known you'd bring me heartbreak,

Dreamlike loves always end when we wake.

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