As pale as a white Rose

she let out one last breath

she was gone and nobody could stop it

The words finally got to her

She fell to the floor with a loud thump

she was now as pale as a white rose

who would have know

she looked so happy

yet was dying inside

now she is gone

left without a letter

her mother is now full of sorrow

who would have known

she never told a soul of her pain

now she is gone

along with her future

now she is gone

she died alone

who would have known

who would have known

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this is so powerful. i love the emotion in it

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