United States
42° 25' 13.5768" N, 83° 14' 23.6184" W

Don’t deal plight to progress
For the lack of the greater goal
Mourning the death of something not born
Not realizing the birth of today
You might see light at the tunnels end
But appreciate the glimmer of certainty shown by the brightness
Brightness is positivity
1 is positivity
Not in volume, but in direction
1 is small, but correct
Best of all, it’s the beginning
Pace with 1
1 grows
Those that fail to realize the potential of 1
Stay enclosed in the ring of its prior stage


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