The sun rays hitting my skin,

the breeze being by the ocean. 

I could get lost standing by the water, 

let my mind ride the waves, there's nothing I'd alter.

It's different during the night, than during the day. 

The moon is also a wonderful sight. 

If I could, I'd be outside all night. 

The stars could accompany me,

viewing every constellation I can see.


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