Open Eyes

Life descends upon us unawares

living is a beauty so beguiling

 

As a human subject to her whim

how could you not embrace her smiling?

 

To awaken with such potential

requite her gift with time you're biding

 

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

Comments

ctyson124

9 years ago

I would really like an opinion on my poem "Open Eyes."

I worked on it for a long while and I'm hoping it's any good. 

Some feedback and criticism would be appreciated. Thank you!

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