"This One's Not !" ... Written by Big Virge 29/10/2007

I've had this said
a number of times !

When it comes to lines
in ,,, My Poems ...

"Virgil man, your poetry
is just too long !"

Well here's a shock
cos' this one's not !

Attention spans
have clearly

" DROPped " ... !!!

Like heavy bombs
Taleban' have stocked !

Well so they say !

The types who play
Political Games
who would probably claim

My views are WRONG !
and that my poetry is
a bit too long !

Well this little script
proves to critics

That ......

" This One's NOT ! "

This poem is about: 
Me
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