one too many

I took one too many

I hope it

will make me better.

I need to have plenty;

Maybe even twenty

To make me better.

I want this day to end

For it will take me with it.
As the sun sets

I will go to rest.

I have to admit

That this feeling

I am enduring

Is not as good

as anticipated.

I will have to take

two too many.

Maybe then

I will be better.

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