My heart is beating

to the rhythm of your breathing

Boom, boom, boom 

I grip your hand


holding to your warmth 

snuggling into your embrace

Peace, serenity, tranquility 


we fuse into one

one mind

one soul



Ms Hawkins

This is the first poem I'm reading on this site and it's beautiful. It's not saying too much at the same time it's saying just enough to express a sweet love. It honestly made me want to take it and write a first chapter to a love story.


So simple, yet so intimate. Love this poem.

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