OLD SHOES

 

                                                           OLD SHOES

                                                                   by

                                                              Erasmo

 

 Everyone has old shoes,

yet many are scared to take off.

I fear to take off my shoes,

I'm scared of the foul ordor that keeps people away

from me. The old, teared, faded colors

shoes are the aprence what people

see yet they hesitate to

see whats behind those shoes.

When I remove my shoes I'm free as a free bird 

when I'm alone.

I run, kick a soccer ball for hours, finding 

my inner peace.

When I go see people, I put on my old shoes 

beacuse of the fear of falling, embarrassing

myself.

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