Oh Sun

Sat, 06/18/2016 - 02:34 -- hillay

Oh Sun
Why do you shine so bright?
In the morning
Even in the night

Oh Sun
Will you display your radiance only on me?
You are a star
Such an admiration from afar

Oh Sun
Why don't you smile always?
My world turns dark
But you continue to make my days

Oh Sun
How can I see my path without you?
Your light is a guidance
Because darkness is tough to get through

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