Oh, That Glorious Day!!!

His children stood in awe of the land in front of them

That most people neglect to seek.

They beheld their far away home in front of them

Where their souls were meant be.


Their home was dressed in

White pure flowers of

All kinds while the land they

Bore behind them and on them was a dark tint.


Their home had two blue-green lakes

Surrounded by wooly trees

That revealed a mighty lion

And loving little lamb with sacrificial

Scars on His hands and feet.


They followed the narrow trail

Down to the land's two parted

Mountains and hollow valley

Where a welcoming wind told,


"You are home now

There will be no suffering or temptation from sin.

I dress you in my purity, love, and peace

Forever and ever, my dear children."




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your love for god is endless

aways have god in your heart no matter what

great poem


Thanks:)!!! He is the reason why I do what I do. Thanks for the support. God bless and keep writing on my friend:)!!!


Love this!


Thanks:)!!! Can't wait to read your poem and leave comments too. God bless and keep writing on my friend:)!!!


I think thats great. I could see every detail in my mind.


Thanks sis(:!!! I wanted to make everyone to see the vision I see in God's face. God bless you and keep writing on my friend!!! 




Amen indeed!!! God bless and thanks for the comment(:!!!


love it! :) 


Thanks(:!!! I appreciate the comment. God bless you and keep writing on my friend!!!


I absolutely love this poem. Great Job! God is love. 


Thanks and indeed God is love and will always love us!!!

God bless all and keep writing on my friend:)!!!

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