Nurses Hope

Click, click, click

time stood as rare as a heart beat,

"shes flatlined",

panic filled the room like an elpephant,

I was bare.

Mourning rose as the sun,

compassion smiled as I woke from what seemed nothing,

even in my weakest time you gave me compssion,

and did it leak down my spine like fluid that brewed from such a place,

a popsical and a time to be alive where I once wasn't,
thanks Alice, your seizure survivor,




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