Lie awake soundlessly

Stars cry as tears fall

Night beckons

Hold tight,slipping away


Numb feeling

Crimson on pale skin

Shards jagged and sharp

Slice swift through musical notes clear


Drop it all 

Turn away,taste unfolds

Pins and needles, fall asleep

Lie awake breathlessly 


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