november 5 2014

Fri, 10/31/2014 - 15:07 -- Angel51

i just think if i could change.....

what would i do?

how could i make them sorry that they evr did this to me?,

Because they lied and promised things like a loving family, but when night comes im cold and alone,

Out here on my own, got responabilities a kid my age shouldnt have,

I laugh to hide all the embarresment,

because when it comes to happiness nobody wants to be sharing it.

im hoping god does something to help me out, im daring him

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