Nothing is Worth it.

Thu, 05/23/2013 - 13:06 -- Velum7


United States
39° 30' 41.7852" N, 76° 41' 56.4612" W

The hardest way to die
is by drowning.
Your lungs get filled up with water,
feel like they're dysfunctional.
You try to get the water out,
but you only manage to get more in.

You feel choked, pain.
Can't breathe.
You get dizzy, tired.
Your heart pumping
trying to stay alive
You can't...

No more time
no one to say good-bye
no one to tell them how you feel.
In the end, the soreness is what lasts
the last second,
that is it.
No more time.

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Wow this is a rly powerful piece...

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