Nothing

Mon, 09/30/2013 - 16:37 -- Qatie

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Excuse me but ma’am have you seen

a set of abandoned feelings?

Ever sense mine have run away from home

i’ve gotten quite lonely out on my own.

 

I’ve taken the thoughts of past regrets

and transformed them into nothingness.

I’ve lost all capacity

and id just like to know whats happening 

 

Theres nothing left anyone can console

Theres left no stories, no thoughts untold.

So i suppose im just an empty hole

that nobody cares to fill with a soul.

 

I’ve been looking so awfully hard

in the deep dark corners of my empty heart,

but i suppose i’m just not understanding

why all this nothingness is so demanding.

 

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