Not Enough...

Thu, 03/08/2018 - 11:58 -- spatlan

   Every day students are afraid of being called short.

Afraid of being called not fit,

Afraid of having trouble with P.E..,

This is school violence & bullying, it has to stop!

 

   Violence isn't good for other people,

Violence isn't good for the person that commits it,

Because people can get hurt and so can you.

Students in school feel like they're not enough.

 

   When, people feel like they're not enough,

They get hurt by committing suicide or getting their self in trouble.

 

   The world has become a place of bullying and school violence.

We can make this world bigger and better!

This poem is about: 
My community

Comments

spatlan

This is good for schools and what people think.Jose Fernandez

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Adrian - Yes We Should Stop Bullying, I like This Poem it is Good :)

spatlan

I like how you added an exageration.

- Ulises Castaneda Mendoza 

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I like how you argue against the world to tell them to become a better place.-Ulisses R

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your poem is great it -demarice

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your poem is great it -demarice

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you are good at rhymnig good job-lia

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I love how you said "We should make this world a better place" -Evelin :)

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I like how you said " students are of afraid of being called short." - Manuel

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