#NoFilter Poem that formed me

The mightiest sin I ever committed

Was loving someone more than Him.

The love was sacred,   

Until he left my heart in shreds.

Bleeding hands from the pieces,

Clouds of darkness from the pain.

Time passing quickly but I was frozen in place.

Pale and weak from suffering, but

The burning flames inside my chest

Rage on like a nasty beast.

As jealousy takes over my sense of reality I become

Cuffed and chained to negative energy.

Unable to see straight and all truth comes to face

Not only did I lose my love, I also lost my friends.

Submerged under water, and unable to breath.

Everyone is talking around me, but I’m the loneliest I’ve ever been.  

What is happening to me?

Lord please come and save me.

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