no nO No

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20905
United States
39° 6' 42.0552" N, 76° 59' 35.1852" W

No no no; don't look at me so.

Well, if I had a bone to pick with you from long ago
(You should have told me so)
But, you didn't tell me even a thing,
So what could I possibly know?
So, no no no; don't look at me so.

Well, I'm tired of you staring me down.
Always trying to bring me down?
Well, no. No no no; I won't go.
So, no no no; don't look at me so.

Something's got to give if you're gonna give me this look.
(Yeah, don't give me that look)
You're doing too much to look at me;
I don't even know what you see,
but no no no; don't look at me so.

:-)

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

great job in expressing yourself
like the play of your choosing of words
keep building and continue to look for inspiration

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