No

Drip, Drip

The sound of blood from my wrists

Drip, Drip

The tears falling from my chin

No, No

The thoughts that course through my mind

No, No

There is a family that loves me

No, No

Someone has to care

No, No

This day, this breath will not be my last

This poem is about: 
Me
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Comments

RamblingRose

Simple, yet communicates the real feeling so effectively. I love this!

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