night of a moving bliss featuring dolvas

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Night Of A Moving Bliss Robert Velez Jr. & Lori Vasquez   A dream …a vision. You and me caught up in the moonlight Two bodies in the shadow of the night Glistening like the ocean sea in the dark Wet like the sand once the waves retreat Touching ever so gently Sweet kisses that hurt so good Enticing sounds of waves hitting the shores peacefully Hands locked in without ever letting go Sensationalizing a moment that takes breaths away Body heat so intense melting away the sting of the cold breeze Embracing and erasing the cares of the world around Blinded and death by an everlasting love that consumes your mind A supernatural connection so strong leaving imprint in the sand That even the powerful tides of the waves will never erase signatures Of those that believe in true love

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

powerful message

the words connected to this poem is very meaningful

thank you lori for collaboration

it was an honor-someday, we should recite this at an opem mic event

WordSmith_15

I love poems that make me think of people...places

this one way great. Collaboration was seamless 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this was another collaboration put together

its about connection and expressing our thoughts behind this piece

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