Never give in

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My heart is hot like fire

My head is drumming hard

As I climb the mountain higher

I realize that I'm far

 

I push myself forward

because my body is weak

But I am climbing towrds

To what I must seek

 

My whole body is sweating

And my legs will soon explode

But I will  let nothing

Stop me from where I need to go

 

I must never give in

Even if I lose

I'll just go back to "Begin"

And that is what I always choose

 

 

 

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