Never Again

I see people picking on this kid.

They are calling  him names

I walked in the locker room and he was on the floor.

I see two people in the locker room with him

He is crying on the floor

They hear me and run.

I go to the kid on the floor

He is frightened and scared 

He can't even speak because of how scared he is

I ask him if he needs anything 

He says he doesn't want to talk about it

Him and I stuck together that year and I made sure he never got picked on or scared again.

This poem is about: 
My community

Comments

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Great job I really like the poem. - Erika

 

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I like how you wrote in the perspective of the bystander ~Natalie O.

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EmanuelRosas-Iliked the poem and you did a great job on it

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Josev-i like how you were postive about your poem 

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marco jimenez:you did a great job dereak.

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josecisneros you did a great job keep up the good worck 

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This is why we have to stop bullying.-Geraldine

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This is a very good poem!-Blanca

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i like your peom and how it ended-jessica

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The ending was very nice and friendly-Gary

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