the naked eye .

judgements. judgements are deadly and dangerous.

they cause tears to appear from a lake of loneliness. 

the lake eventually becomes an ocean and leads to depression.

depression causes emotions to shatter as if they were a part of a broken mirror.

fear. fear is often unwanted and embedded with obstacles.

it causes thoughts to become trapped like a caged bird.

neglect. neglect is talent chained to a hollow dungeon of sorrow.

hate causes minds to become lost, like a map without directions.

j u d g e m e n t s

creating a foggy vision, leading to chances being unused

a blurry vision is leading you down the wrong path

you are blind.

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