My Year-long Breeze

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5162
Australia
35° 7' 5.7396" S, 138° 32' 37.4496" E

As if you were on an ocean beach

is how you should imagine.

The wind pushing your hair back,

the smell that is so divine

the smell, charm brings to my mind.

Oh, if you could only understand...

you'd compare it to a beach

you'd compare him to the warmth

the warmth you get laying beneath the sun

not timid but something that fully overcomes your body

an uncontrollable warmth.

You'd compare it to a beach

the soothing sound of his voice

so calming yet steamy.

Your mind feels free

like the birds in the sky

when the guy I love

is by my side

at least, that's how you'd compare

to the guy I can't live without.

This poem is about: 
Me

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