My tears fall down like

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38° 59' 34.9512" N, 94° 40' 52.3524" W

My tears fall down like summer rain, 

adding moisture to my scolding cheeks.

The words hurtled at me like a moving train,

No one understanding there piercing pain. 

 

My soul becomes broken like a shattered mirror,

reflecting the pain i feel within. 

My sanity and self prerseverance leaking out,

Seeping through the cracks in my already fractured spirit.

 

I look in the mirror telling myself I'll be okay, 

But even from behind these hazel bloodshot eyes...

I know it's a lie...

If i look deep within I see both sides of myself fighting... 

 

My question is.... 

Who will win.

 

And can I survive till the end?

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