My mind kills me.

Tue, 09/09/2014 - 15:28 -- Brilamz

My mind kills me

When I'm sitting all alone

My stomach aches

My skin tears

But it's my thoughts

That cut down to the bone

 

Nobody can see

How much I cry at night

Reality transparent

Misconceptions apparent

My logic and emotions

Are in a constant fight

 

Don't want to live

But do I want to die?

My head is filled with sadness

Faking smiles left and right

I can't escape the labyrinth

or can I?

Comments

Tinted

That first verse was deep!  

Rhyhm scheme in the second verse was awesome!

Brilamz

Thank you!

 

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