My Lifeline

by Ariel Douglas (19 February 2016)

 

Breath

In my lungs

Tears

On my face

Sun

Setting on

All my dreams

Desperate

Crying out

Stranded

No escape

Deserted

On a forsaken island

Alone

On this island

Alone

All alone

But no.

I am not alone

Because I have all I need

No

Not my spirit

Not my will

Not my heart

No.

All I need

Is all I have

My Jesus

Living in me

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

ArielMoriahMaryDouglas

Thank you! I love when people give feedback and few people ever do. Rock on!

ArielMoriahMaryDouglas

Hey, guys! This poem is on YouTube! To find it put this in the search "30 Days of Poetry - Day 24: My LIfeline by Ariel Douglas". I'd love if you could give it a listen. Each poem is prefaced with an explanation of the poem and its origins. Thank you much!

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