my life......

Sun, 01/12/2014 - 18:41 -- idarly

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My life starts on a mountain;

where there is grass, trees,cows,farmers and mothers

every morning making coffee and cookies for sale. 

Who cuddles you and tells you everything will be fine. 

My life starts with church every sunday morning down a steep hill

while speaking with my second tongue Creole a lanuage that is dead to people

but not to me. My life is waking up at 5 in the morning walking 4 miles to school

just to tell you your montly payment is due.

My life states with God who is the Alfa and Omega the Beginning and the End.

My life continues with the pencils, notbooks and books that i constantly read to

receive the knowlegde that i need for my future. That shines brighter then a candle

that lights up my parents room where 4 souls sleep. My life contains moving to a different school

in America for a better education. Now i am proud to say "you might be invited to my graduation".

My life had just started.

 

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