My Family

My family is like a building.

My father is like the brick

That brings us together.

My mother is stairs that

Bring us up when we are down.

My sister is like open windows

Who gives us fresh air

I am the nail who holds

Us together with my  love

By: Marie William

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My family
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mariewilly

My short term goals are to further my education by receiving my bachelor’s and master’s degree in health science, and become a doctor one day.  My goal is to achieve success. In life most people want happiness and success. My long term goal are once I receive my degrees, I want to travel the world and work in different countries to learn about different cultures to treat and care for them.  Since to world is diverse, I would like to spread the health knowledge in order for people to be aware.

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