My Dreams Saved Me

Tue, 07/30/2013 - 21:15 -- Eryca.Z

I used to wonder if I hopeless being around all these roaches with the fact I had more things on my mind than what approaches. 

Or with my black heart made from scattered thoughts.  

Like the times I've seen my mother suffer which I can't recover.  

I promise that I'll make to the top before my heartbeat ever stops. 

Because I have dreams, dreams where everything is possible because there is no such thing as an obstacle. 

If they don't know your dreams they can't shoot them down. 

Because in life either people are going to feel you or let you drown. 

So always try before you die or you'll always wonder what if I... 

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Comments

addisonmc521

Beautiful words of wisdom. Relatable. Blunt. To the point with nothing to hide.

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart! 

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