M.V.P spitting bars (volume 4)- free writing

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

i grab a handle on life like
wife and kids with money invested and saved
brave and courageous to the real world knocking
down walls from a family that is dysfunctional
pleasant heaven sent
angels to save me from oblivion
call self destruction
it was presence
with essence
like a smell of aroma full of fragrance
a remedy that remains steady

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Amy

Wow! No one here is as prolific as you. I am in awe! I wish I had all that in me!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for the luv and support
you can be sweetie
just be true to yourself in all that you do
check out my other poems

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