M.V.P spitting bars (volume 2)

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

tongue twist lips locked in
mixed sexual grip
nails underneath my skin
we begin to simmer and
draw closer to each other
hot and heavy body weather
crucial exploration brings a warm welcome
on any occasion, whether it be a stroll
along the waterfront
or an unscheduled art form

from the harmonious music within me
i trim the fat
from the exact
measurement comprehension
very extensive, but yet limited
formulas pawned off of us

Guide that inspired this poem: 

Comments

ruppd

I really like the feel and rhythmic tone

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

ty 4 the support
check out my other poems
give me honest feedback

khadijahlane

this was well written. i rarely feel the poetry i read from people my age, but i felt that :)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

it means so much to me in receiving much support

im very humble

check out my other poems i wrote-give me honest feebacks

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741