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36° 37' 24.3444" N, 119° 39' 41.4216" W

Simple sweet gutair am humbled by the bass
The bass of the human hand play it over and over again
Rhythm captured my heart the melody feeds on my soul
Sunken in between the holds and strands
The notes tear me apart and swallow me whole
Sinking in my mind captivating my soul
Sunken beneath all is
Music captured me whole
I never wont to let it go.


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